加拿大进出口外贸我英文不好,用翻译软件的,请教一下我这样写可以吗



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老外叫我发邮件给他,我英文不好,用翻译软件的,请教一下我这样写可以吗

我是自己办厂的,老外叫我发邮件给他,我英文不好,用翻译软件的,请教一下我这样写可以吗
Glad to meet you, if you can become a business partner, I will give you the best service, if you can not become a business partner, then I hope we can become friends.
I am in Yiwu Chinese Nuofei bag factory work for 10 years, now my factory moved to Wenzhou, renamed Cangnan shunchuang handicraft factory, the main products are non-woven shopping bags, ice bags, cotton shopping bags, folding shopping bags, canvas bags, and some new crafts, today I have attached some of our flagship product, I hope you can mail back to tell me that you need what kind of products, we can not produce, then I will give you my price, let you have the advantage of contrast is not, hope we can learn slowly, to become a good partner.
In the future, if I have a new product out, I will be the first time to send you!

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有人帮忙吗

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好中文啊,你还是直接发中文的过来,让哪个小伙伴有时间帮你翻译下吧,而且老外做生意的思维和中国人还是有点区别的,用在中国谈的那一套是不行的,要稍微换下思路,包括介绍方面!

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前面还好, 后面就。。。

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Hello

How are you? Glad to know you. This is ... hoping to become business parter and friend with you.Attacched  hot items are recommend for you.
Our factory located in wenzhou,name of cangnanshunchuang handicraft factory. Professional production
non-woven shopping bags, ice bags, cotton shopping bags, folding shopping bags, canvas bags, and some new crafts.
We are manufacturer that can offer good price, good services for you.

Hope to hear from you soon! Thank you very much!

给你参考

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一般介绍一下,你是谁,哪个公司或者工厂,主营产品,出口市场,介绍几个知名度高的大客户。然后附上几款具有代表性的产品报价。

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Dear Sir/ Madam,

Thanks for your inquiry at ???.

We are professional supplier for ??? at competitive price, located in Shanghai City, East China. Here is the attachment with some pictures of our products that may suit your requirements, for more, please check our website, and select the products that you’re interested in.

Please refer to enclosed company profile and browse our website at www.so.com so as to have a basic knowledge of our company.

We have great interest in developing business with you, should you have any inquiries or comments, we would be glad to talk in details through Skype (????????) or email ([email protected]) or any way you like.



Please feel free to contact us if you need quotation on MV switchgears or internal parts for your projects.

Thanks!



QQ: 23625 3096

[ 本帖最后由 kanezhang88 于 2016-9-19 16:10 编辑 ]

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翻译软件还是不行的。有很多地方看起来很别扭。

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相比之下7楼看着更舒服

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楼主没解释清楚在什么前提下发给老外啊,是要你报价呢?还是对其中一款产品感兴趣呢?还是想看你的产品目录呢?

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Dear Friend:
How are you?
We are the professional manufacturer of kinds of 产品名字. Causing we are the manufacturer, so we can provide very competitive price and best service for you.For more information about our company, you can view our website: 网址If you need any help, pls feel free to contact with us in any time by using Mobile,  tel, whatsapp etc.
Mobile:
Hope we will build the long time business cooperation in the future.
Thanks and best regards.
下面是英文署名
希望能对你有帮助,有问题也可以随时找我。QQ 2318272446

[ 本帖最后由 hellojoyzhang 于 2016-9-20 14:37 编辑 ]
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