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6-18FACING DIFFICULTES
要求：100个字
As it known to us all that life is full of variety of difficults.When here comes the hardship,some people feel
discourged;some is upset,some worry a lot;There is no doubt different people have different attituade towards
the difficullties.And have a correct attitude towards the life is important too.
This is my idea of apporaches the difilcult.First of all.Clam down and keep confident.Worrying is useless for the difficult and even
make you make the wrong way to slove a problem.Keep an objective is the first way we should do.Secondly,Try your best and
never give up.As the old going says:Failure is the mother of success.Don't lose heart and you will be surely come arross the problem we meet.
Let's just smile to face the difficulties.
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it 改为 is
here 改为 there
And have a correct attitude towards the life is important 中的have 改为having
This is my idea of apporaches the difilcult这句话不通顺吧？
make you make the wrong way to slove a problem 什么意思？
Keep an objective is the first way we should do 一个动词词组怎么可以充当主语呢？ 语法不过关啊！
As the old going says 应该是as the old saying goes！！
还有，英文逗号之后请，用小写！！！
[ 本帖最后由 danielxiong 于 2012-6-18 13:14 编辑 ]
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总的来说可以发现很多错误哦！！ 你得加油改正哦！
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Life sucks, suck it. 同样的意思，爷们会这么写
你写那么多柔情细思，多gay啊，难道
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[quote]原帖由 sunnybelt 于 2012-6-18 12:44 发表 6-18
FACING DIFFICULTES
要求：100个字
......some people feel discourged; 应为discouraged
This is my idea of apporaches the difilcult. 应为 to approach
Don't lose heart and you will be surely come arross the problem we meet. 应删除
Let's just smile to face the difficulties. 可改为when facing
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谢谢楼上的大家。我会努力纠正，没检查就发上去。希望接下来会越来越进步。
还有LS的某老兄，我是女生，所以写的这么娘
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发现了好多语法错误，我是一个语法超级烂的人
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As it known to us all that life is full of variety of difficults.When here comes the hardship,some people feel
discouraged;some is upset,some worry a lot;There is no doubt different people have different attituade towards
the difficullties.And have a correct attitude towards the life is important too.
This is my idea to apporaches the difilcult.First of all.Clam down and keep confident.Worrying is useless for the difficult and Keep an objective is the first way we should do.Secondly,Try your best and
never give up.As the old going says:Failure is the mother of success.Don't lose heart and you will surely come arross the problem we me
Let's just smile when facing the difficulties.
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以The Advantages and Disadvantages of Traveling为题，写一篇长为120-150词的小作文
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as is known to us all ...
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我看了那个大大的DIFFICULTES。。。楼主打漏了。。。DIFFICULTIES
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Let's just smile to face the difficulties. 可改为when facing
=>>face xxx with smiling.
FYI
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this is a good one, Face difficulties with smiles
or
Just smiling in the Face of Difficulties.
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欣赏楼主的学习态度及生活态度，
建议你多阅读再写，在没培养起基本的语感之前，这样练习很可能是事倍功半，或者说有害无益。
注意，是阅读地道的东西而不是我们国人写的或翻译的！
读多了你会发现，其实人家平常于交流的英语比我们用的简单得多。（如果你是要交流而不是做学术，能简则简） 如，
他们说：
Life is hard.
而不会说：
As it known to us all that life is full of variety of difficults.
他们说：
Worrying is useless and it makes things worse.
而不会说：
Worrying is useless for the difficult and even make you make the wrong way to slove a problem。
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Nowadays, more and more people are traveling around there spare time. The traveling is interesting and attractive us so much. Traveling broadens our range of knowledge but only by communicate with the local person but also taste some food you never eat.
Also, you feel comfortable by surfing in the sea, climbing in beautiful mountain. It relaxes you from the work burden. What’s more, you will more experienced by going there and here. And find the meaning of the life.
Every coin has two sides. Traveling has its disadvantages too. On unfamiliar place, there may some uncontrollable situation happened and made you uncomfortable. You may get ill and being unable to enjoy the trip. Secondly, traveling it’s costly. We need have a enough money to afford any unexpected cost.
Anyway, I love the traveling. Friend, how about you?
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