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A bird without wingswhat it can do
just look at the blue sky
just desire it
The reason that it can not fly
it is that its wings were broken
as it want to fly too much
so it try more and more
But, the accident
broke its daeam
broke its wings
it never fly any more
Every day ,
when it look foward to the sky
it wanted to open its wings
but it know
it can not fly any more
It is very terrible
it cried ,cried, cried
when its tears dried out
the bird knew
it is the truth
The sky still very beautiful,bule, and clear
the bird knew
its dream is there
but it can not touch it
Thought, thought,thought
it wanted leave the pity in its life
so, no matter how hard it is
it want to try
it know, it will spend a lot of years
but, the dream is vocativing it
it can refuse the dream
the dream is the power of its life
Try, try, try
maybe it will be hurt seriously
althought it has not the wings
try another way
maybe it can help the bird to hug the dream
come on!
[ 本帖最后由 junpeng007 于 2009-12-25 14:11 编辑 ]
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A bird without wings
折翼的飞鸟
A bird without wings
折翼的飞鸟
what it can do
它能做什么？
just look at the blue sky
仅仅的仰望着蓝天，
just desire it
仅仅的渴望着蓝天，
The reason that it can not fly
不能飞翔的理由
it is that its wings were broken
as it want to fly too much
是因为他不断奋力扑翅而使双翼受伤，
so it try more and more
因此，它越来越多的尝试！
But, the accident
诚然，这场意外
broke its daeam
破灭了它的梦想
broke its wings
摧毁了它的双翼
it never fly any more
它将再也不能飞翔于天际。
Every day ,
每一天，
when it look foward to the sky
当它期待回归蓝天怀抱的时候
it wanted to open its wings
它想重新的展翅高飞
but it know
但是它知道
it can not fly any more
它将再也无法飞翔
It is very terrible
这是多么残忍
it cried ,cried, cried
它哭泣，不止地哭泣
when its tears dried out
当它的眼泪干涸
the bird knew
折翼的鸟儿知道
it is the truth
这一切都是现实
The sky still very beautiful,bule, and clear
天空依旧的美丽，湛蓝，清澈
the bird knew
鸟儿一直知道
its dream is there
它的梦想是在那里
but it can not touch it
但是它将再也无法触碰那片梦想
Thought, thought,thought
思考，不断的思考
it wanted leave the pity in its life
它想要脱离这令它遗憾的生命
so, no matter how hard it is
因此，无论将面对多大的困阻
it want to try
它要努力的尝试
it know, it will spend a lot of years
它知道，这将要耗费多年的时间
but, the dream is vocativing it
但是，梦想依旧在召唤着它
it can refuse the dream
它本可以拒绝梦想的召唤 不知道是不是少了个NOT （它不能拒绝梦想的呼召）
the dream is the power of its life
梦想，是它生命的动力源泉！
Try, try, try
尝试，努力地尝试
maybe it will be hurt seriously
也许会将是严重的伤痛
althought it has not the wings
尽管它是折翼的鸟儿
try another way
尝试另一种方式
maybe it can help the bird to hug the dream
也许，这将帮助这只折翼的鸟儿重新拥抱它的梦想
come on!
努力。加油！
[ 本帖最后由 only4test 于 2009-12-24 12:13 编辑 ]
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When I come across with this little poem, I feel really sorry for that little bird. But I also admire it because of its courage and longlasting expectation for a bright future.
I can't help thinking that what we do when we face with big troubles or obstacles. Though it cannot be that easy like just going forward towards them or sth, we do need a tough will that accompanies us to overcome it or pump strength into us.
And we cannot give up ourselves. If we do, we gonna lose the world. But we neither accept everything in front of us blindly, using our brain to think and seizing the keypoints you think they are worthy.
Be calm, be tough, be successful
[ 本帖最后由 junpeng007 于 2009-12-24 13:15 编辑 ]
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Nice
I like your translation version
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well, hope things are going well with you ........there..
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I am so love this sentences,from the LORD who always love us.
Have I not commanded you? Be strong and courageous. Do not be terrified; do not be discouraged, for the LORD your God will be with you wherever you go.!
sorry for this little bird, it cannot fly any more. but,we must have this faith from God,HE loves me .HE loves the bird,HE loves everyone on the earth. whatever we are, health or hurted.
just remember, we are be loved, really be loved.
" this you greatly rejoice, though now for a little while you may have had to suffer grief in all kinds of trials"
Peter said,we MUST remember,all the griel will past. with hope,faith,Love. we are be loved.
WE ARE BE LOVED, WE ARE BE LOVED!
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Thanks.
It seems you are the Santa coming to send me a good present.
Merry Christmas!
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Merry Christmas to you too! and say~~~~~~~~~~
MERRY CHRISTMAS TO EVERYONE HERE~ LOVE YOU GUYS
wish all of you can catch your dreams!
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thank u very much
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A bird without wings
what he can do
is just looking at the azure sky
helplessly
改一下更有詩意.
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hehe
Maybe, but you can see the real meaning of this poem is not just to tell the bitterness hahha
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what i am talking about is the words - should be rhythmic and beautiful.
For example: blue sky, can u use "azure sky" instead? which is fresher.
Regarding the keynote of your poem, i know it and i never want to change it.
FYI
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if you have another poem, you could share more with us.
and we hope we can have nice communication here,and learn from you guys!
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i want to be a fly fish,i call it fisher,just like the bird
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i never know i can fly. my name has the root from my family - to live in riverside, to live on fishing.
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