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问题八：哆哩哆嗦 不够简洁Hi Gemma,
1. I have sent the email again I failed to send to you. I think I have sent it to you successfully this time.
2. I have received the new drawing for DSUK. I have completed the translation and I sent it to the Sample Room on June 13.
3. Please send spec. sheets and other things to me from now on, not to Jordan.
Regards,
Tina
[分析]：在一次英文邮件培训中我曾问一名外贸业务员这封邮件有什么问题，她看了很久也没有回答出来，后来我请她大声读一遍，她还是没有发现问题，然后我请她再读一遍，她才豁然明白。短短的一封邮件中出现了七个“I”。在英文邮件中当主语是第一人称“I”时常可省略。修改后的全文如下：
Have sent the email again I failed to send you. I think it will reach you this time.
Completed translating the new drawing for DSUK from you and sent it to the Sample Room on June 13.
Please send spec. sheets and other things to me from now on, not to Jordan.
Regards,
丁军
Apr.3, 2019
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