加拿大外贸
My name is Jim, an International trade salesman, live in Qingdao.
I was born in 1987, a small village in China–a land which I have a complicated feelings towards it.
All men there are created equal, but live unequally.
Poor peoples' only hope is to study the knowledge that they never use in their lives;
just for passing the examination they hated;
go to college where they waste their best time in life.
After graduation, staying in a city, live a “Happy Life” in other people’s eyes.
This is the life of majority Chinese young men .
However, I always think I’m a lucky dog ! Thank God!
Because I didn't lost myself under this circumstance!
I can still think and make decisions by my-own brain;
distinguish what are the meaningful things to me;
pursue love, truth, beauty and kindness in my life and work.
Have great enthusiasm for International Trade, language and IT.
Good at Organic chemicals raw material, to become an expert in this field is my aim.
Inner-energy and strong curiosity drive me work with heart and soul!
A young man full of positive energy keeps on going!
[ 本帖最后由 iamapilot 于 2013-3-1 11:09 编辑 ]
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支持！
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挺有新意的
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谢谢鼓励！
也欢迎拍砖，里面用词不到位或有更好的用词，各位前辈帮我提提！
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不错~写的很好~
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谢谢支持
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谢谢鼓励！ 是准备放在我的个人网站里的，方便国外客户了解自己的，欢迎拍砖，里面用词不到位或有更好的用词，各位前辈帮我提提
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怎么开始时JIM 后面又是JACK，，费解啊
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不过这英语是挺溜的哈，值得肯定~
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你想表达啥？
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未必老外明白你的幽默，还神奇的国土，那不是印度吗？
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我觉得用第一人称太多了，很重复，按英语写作课上的讲法是“显得过于自我’。可以在句式上调整下。
还有后面那么多形容词。。。
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Good suggestion 我也感觉 但是 改句式时感觉功力不够啊！可以帮帮忙，改一句也行
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感谢拍砖，我也感觉有可能没有我们这样的文化背景 理解有难度， 我是想引出
examination-oriented education;
twisted social values
我的悲催遭遇。 有什么高见？ 提提
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想表达一个遭遇悲催但一直诚实上进的jim
[ 本帖最后由 iamapilot 于 2013-1-23 08:28 编辑 ]
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