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Dear Bobby :Firstly,we are a professional manufacturer of auto switches for vehicle, rather than trading company.
Then we are explicitly tell you ,the pic and the sample are completely different. And our campany have similar products please check the enclose.
You'll see that our offer compares favorably with the quotations you can get elsewhere,and it's important that the quality of our products is reliable.
Thanks in advance for your quick reply!Rgds
Danae
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Dear Bobby :
Thanks for your swift reply.
Firstly(firstly没必要，可省略，第二段的then同理，只要格式上分段清楚，不需要添加多余的标注，除非是在一段话里),we are a professional manufacturer of auto switches for vehicle. We are not a trading company.
Then I have to tell you, the pic and the sample are 2 completely different items. Our campany have similar products please check pics enclosed.
You'll see that our offer compares favorably with the quotations you can get elsewhere(这句直接把我看晕了，简单点Our price is competitive 最好简单明了地说，以为这里，你并不知道别人到底报了什么价，还是有诚意点吧，当然，你要确信你的价格在行业里是OK的). And what is more important is that the quality of our products are reliable.
Rgds
[ 本帖最后由 fwsteve 于 2013-1-17 10:56 编辑 ]
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Dear Bobby,
We are a professional production of specializing automotive switches manufacturer, not a trading company. Our products are high quality and reasonable price, Please see the attached catalogs and qutations of our various products.
If there is some questiones, Please let me know.We are looking forward to your early reply!
Best regards,
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