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好吧  今天没什么邮件      一般周六到周一都没:


Hi Selina,



Noted with thanks....



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Best Regards
Holly Liu


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FYI

Sku HM103 the caption ref on page 11 has been amended will be on daily transfer today


Best Regards,
Selina


这是个简单脑残的,一般说收到了,谢谢就是Noted with thanks, got it and thanks 或者 received,thanks.....

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Hi XXX,



I'm sorry for my later reply and Eason can't do it ,but I know some Plastic mold manufactures ,


I can introduce to you and ask for the mold charge for you tomorrow,pls note,thanks.....




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Best Regards
Holly Liu


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Hi Holly,



Asking for you my private question. Do you know what’s the estimated Mould charge for attached Mouse Trap?? Can Eason do it??



Best wishes!

Jay~~ ^_^

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Hi  XXX,




Confirmed by Leon,tomorrow afternoon Will send the dies to STL before 4.00pm,thanks....





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Best Regards
Holly Liu






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Hi  XXX,


After checked,Summarized as below:



A599XCC621890 (foil dies have damage on the letter of “T”,so remade the foil die, pls see attachment)


A799XCC621743AT (missing the flower part foil die,so complement to make this die,pls see attachment)


A599XCC621815AT(missing the foil die,so complement to make this die,pls see attachment)


Pls confirm asap , then I'll arrange to make this dies,thanks......




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Best Regards
Holly Liu


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Hi Holly,



Please follow up with below issue immediately, and please make sure the new die can be deliver to STL by tomorrow, it is top urgent!!



Best wishes!

Jay~~ ^_^

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Hi XXX,



We just informed by STL there are 2 dies issues been found, please inform Eason to remake and deliver to STL ASAP!!



1.       A599XCC621890 – foil dies have damage on the letter of “T”, please see attached photos.

2.       A799XCC621743 tip on – it is missing the flower part foil die, please see attached photos.



Best wishes!

Jay~~ ^_^

[ 本帖最后由 溪宝宝 于 2012-7-24 17:48 编辑 ]

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Hi  Wayne,



pls see attachment,about H622485, we have checked our film and it is right ,but the Double ETCH effect  


我们检查了菲林,是正确的,但是做出来的贺卡双层效果不一致,我不知道这样写对不对


of card is not match with film,could  you pls ask  XXX to return the die for Eason checking;


请您让XXX把模具退回来给艺成检查


About H622517,Because the design part is too thin and the texture HMK 41 is large than the design part,


因为图案部分太细,纹路比图案还粗,所以做出来贺卡上的纹路效果不明显


so the texture effect is not  clear cover the card.


Pls note, let me know if any questions ,thanks..




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Holly Liu


这个邮件写的我自己都觉得有点杯具

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一般好点的邮箱,输入的时候,拼写和简单的语法错误都会被用波浪线标出来的,不知道你注意到没
留心一下,狠方便的,少-ly,-er,a,the的情况基本可以被消灭
well noted换汤不换药,调着样来呗,about就for呗,because就since呗

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谢谢               


我们邮箱不是很好  这个检查不出来  


希望以后常指教        

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看了一句, 帮你改一下,sorry for the delay, 别说  later reply,太中国式了

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Pls see attachment ,have checked and arranged ,but for the SKU# A799XCC621997 ,have beed received


in daily transfer HCA 5-1 and send to STL, without art file we can not to check whether it is the same,


pls confirm ,thanks...



请查看附件,已经核对并且安排生产,但是SKU#A799XCC621997已经在HCA5-1的PC接受并且做了电板送到XXX


,这个重复的档案没有art档案,所以不能判断是不是完全相同的。。。。


已经收到是用have received 还是have been received 的呢  ,还有已经送到STL应该是have  sent 低级错误



是否是同样的 用whewher it is the same,合适吗


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After asked for the Plastic mold manufactures ,Please view the following details:



1.To count the price of mouse trap need a design paper with PRO  format;


2.The price is based on the mold size,injection molding machine and mold material;


3.I provide you two Plastic mold manufactures and you can contact they directly,



计算用To count不知道合适不,总是纠结用词的问题,还有一个低级错误就是,居然用宾格和主格都用错了


they 和them  


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谢谢,欢迎常来指教           

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here is the mould makers' contact info:
xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
1 More details of the mouse trap product needed, QTY, material, design etc.
A 3D design file in x_t/PRO/3ds format showing all dimensions of the product will be perfect for the mould fee calculation.
2 More details of the mould needed, type, QTY, CAV, material etc.

其实说明白最重要,agree?这封信的主要目的还是告诉他模具厂的联系方式吧
是我的话,会问下他最终目的是要采购模具还是产品
如果是产品,只要量够,或者单稳,模具成本不用太纠结,不是免费就是返还
如果是要采购模具,那就至少要提供我说的那些信息
产品量影响模具的寿命,也就影响其用材,产品材料直接影响模具材料,模具材料直接反映在价格上,后面那些也都一个道理

more specific, more effective



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    谢谢  我觉得我总结能力太差了    我就是想表达这个意思来的

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Per talked with representative of STL and Hallmark may in Eason office,Eason can separate


the Flute & Flat into Foil die and Foil Emboss die to save cost on the premise of production,


pls confirm,thanks....



根据五月份在EASON  ,STL 和 HMK 的代表的谈话,为了节约成本,在不影响STL生产的前提下EASON可以将 FLUTE & FLAT模具


分为FOIL EMBOSS 模具和 FLAT做,请您确认,


我觉得这个邮件真的有问题,用词和语序,有路过的师傅麻烦指点一下,谢谢

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Per discussion with representatives of STL and Hallmark  at Esason office in May, separate production of Foil die and Foil Emboss die is accpetable to replace molding of Flute & Flat in order to save cost. However the premise is this changes will no influence on producion schedule.

你力求简洁,但是实际上意思都没表达清楚,如果不是中文,我根本没看懂。

当然我的也不是最好的,FYI Only
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