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actually.i just to resign of my last job in november,i'm a merchandiser in footwear foreign company,our products are mainly exported to the america.i mainly responsible for the factory production schedule and quality superision of products,and deal with customer email and packing require on time \making documents for customer and with customer comfirm the delivery after booking to forward,at the same time i need to assist the factory until delivery of the products.in fact,i love this job so much,but i don't like the work environment and working atmosphere.so i quit my last job.so i'm now looking for a job that i like
这是我写的一篇关于工作的英语作文,大家帮忙修改一下,语法.句子...谢谢
[ 本帖最后由 patty-chu 于 2011-11-22 12:40 编辑 ]
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首先没有l just to 这种说法，要么l just resign or l resign, 其次，没有resign of 这种表达，resign or resign from. superision? 拼写错误？
还要responsible 是形容词，要么l am ~ ，or take charge of .
其中and使用过多，单句过长，可是适当使用连接词，besides，moreover等等
FYI LOL
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