加拿大外贸
辛苦了两年，开发了一个客户，下单了，但是，最后因为退税的问题，又赔了。所以，无论如何都想让客人继续下单，请求大家，看看，我下面的这封邮件这样翻译行吗，英语不好。那一票挤压棒的货，应该你就快要收到货物了。我们也非常希望，质量能满足或者超过你的要求。整套的银行单据，你的银行应该也收到了（我们做的D/P，我们的意思是让客人快付款吧）。我们相信这一合同，只是我们以后长期业务的一个良好的开端。我们的相互理解与相互支持肯定会获得更长，更长远的发展。
我们公司有优热的产品是： MMO， 高硅铸铁阳极的产口，铸造镁阳极，挤压镁阳极。铸造D形阳极，我已经根据现行的原材料价格报给了，你的同事。但是，我一直没有收到他的任何建议。你能否帮我问一下。为了你能做更多的市场，我们也可以再做适当的调整我们的价格。高硅铸铁阳极的技术资料，我已在附件里附上了，如果你有任何的询单，我也非常高兴给你最优惠的价格。
Wish everything well with you.
The 5000pcs Extruded Magnesium Anode should reach you before Sep.20. We do hope these goods will meet or exceed your quality requirement. All shipping documents should be reached your bank now. We sincerely hope this order is the first of many orders for years to come. Our mutual understanding and cooperation will certainly result in more important business.
Our company has a competitive edge on the following product: MMO, High Silicon Casting Anode, Casting Magnesium Anode, Extruded Magnnesium Anode. I have sent the Quotation of Casting Magnesium to Mr.David. Could you help me ask Mr. David to give me some comments on the Quotation?
In the attachment, there is HSCA Specification in our company. If you have any inquriy, I will try my best to give you the best quotation.
I am looking forward to more opportunities of serving you.
[ 本帖最后由 patty-chu 于 2011-9-5 17:54 编辑 ]
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Our company has a competitive edge on the following product:
我的翻译供参考： We are in advantege of following products:
I have sent the Quotation of Casting Magnesium to Mr.David. Could you help me ask Mr. David to give me some comments on the Quotation?
我的翻译供参考： have sent the Quotation of Casting Magnesium to Mr.David, but have not received any comment from him. Could you kindly help me to remind him about this matter?
说一句，LZ你的翻译还不错。
[ 本帖最后由 四色依米 于 2011-9-2 15:24 编辑 ]
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good idea, thanks so much.
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能有更多的人，再帮助我改一下吗，非常感谢呀
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船期不要说得太肯定
建议用 around 20th
now we will submit all the shipping documents to your bank,
We sincerely hope this order is the good begining of our long term and stablity cooperation
Could you help me ask him if there are any comments for our quotation.
为了你能做更多的市场，我们也可以再做适当的调整我们的价格
你这不是明摆着告诉他 这批货我卖贵了 下批给你降点 楼主你太心急 姿态摆得很低 这样很不好的 商务最终是平等的
个人建议 楼主不要介意
[ 本帖最后由 yy169169 于 2011-9-4 11:37 编辑 ]
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真的真的非常感谢你的修改
加拿大电商昨天我把提单复件发给了客户，今天收到了他回信，如下： Dear Nicholas, please send all shipping documents. We will check B/L copy and we will reply ASAP. Thank you Best Regards ......................................... 加拿大电商刚从事这行半年，对电子行业不了解，自己整理了些，算是学习，供大家分享，也请大家补充。我毕竟是个文科生，对这方面知识严重欠缺。 DVD:英文全名是Digital Video Disk, 即数字视频光
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