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Accidently,i received a call from Boss the car have been stopped under office,you start to pack up and get ready to go to factory in 20 minuters.Actually.i haven't prepared everything i need to use,if i got ready pack these things in advance,now i can take a good rest and needn't so busy for doing that.After a while,everything that should be prepared have been ready and i go downstairs and walk towards agent of company which is located in first floor.do you get ready to go?The driver that will send us off to factory ask me."Yeah,nearly,i just got a call from my colleagues and they need my help,i will be back for a while".
"oK."
I get to ninth floor where my colleagues live in,when i open the door of elevator,they are just waitting the elevator.It is a good coincidence for us,i quickly press the button preventing the elelator running away,so that they can carry essentials into elevator more easily.Everything is going smooth and kept accordance with our expectation.We and driver start our jorney to go to factory,to be frank,this is so long journey which is out of our imagination.I am nearly going to asleep during whole voyage that is ailltle bit tiring.Ok,we are safe to get to factory where i will study product knowledge much more.Miss Wang call for some helpers to settle us in a old dormitory where looks alittle old and dirty,each of us know why i come to factory , we absorb experiences and knowledges as much as possible.So we don't show unwillingness of accommodation at all,give best wishes to us,we also believe one day will be the day all dreams come true.
[ 本帖最后由 shunyi.xu 于 2011-3-28 16:11 编辑 ]
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楼主像记流水账啊 语法错误好多。。。。 get ready to pack
received a call》 got吧 （within) in 20 min..uters didint prepare everything (anything)
太多了
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很正常，因为我是一口气写完的，关键是看的懂。
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中式英语 中国人和老外都懂。。。哈哈
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能够写出纯正的ENGLISH的人少之又少，我只能尽量练习，以求达到这样的效果。毕竟俺们的母语是中文，思维也是中式的。
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你想说明什么呢，练手？
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