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Introduce myselfMy name is XXX,I’m 28 years old,born in Hubei province.In 2004 and 2005, I got CET6 and certificate of graduation respectively.My major is foreign trade english.
My hobbies are reading, listen to the song , sport and travel.
I’m clever with computers and a good command of English in listening, speaking, reading and writing.
And sincere,independent,with a strong team player and a great interpersonal relationship.
I will try my utmost to expand the foreign trade fields.
请问还需要增加一些其它内容不？以上表达是否有误?或者是否有范文？谢谢请教！
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中国式英语啊！基本意思是出来了，但中国式思维啊~~~
读来很生硬
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那请你帮忙改改
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I am XXX,28 years old,my beautifull hometown lacates in the southern part of china ,Hubei province,
I have already got CET6 and certificate of graduation , Business English is my major,I am interested in reading, listening to pop music , sporting and traveing,I am good at ..............,............
...........
不过，总的来说，还好，就是要生动一点，本人之拙见，共同学习吧
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有点忙，有空再看吧~~~~
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First thanks you today to my reception.
I am ***called, from the hubei province,and I am 28year old.
I wants in your firm to obtain foreigncommerce.
Myself positive optimistic, honest, diligent, has the strong communication,ability to work well with others,and willing to learn and progress．
I am good at English in oral,writing,having intimate knowledge of international trading process and loperation,also I am excellent in computer field.
If your firm can give me this opportunity, I will decide will do diligently well, will not let you be disappointed. Introduces this simply, hoped that my today's performance can let you satisfy. Thanks!
我也是英语菜鸟，共同学习 ，别笑话我
[ 本帖最后由 水格Ling凌 于 2010-3-24 10:55 编辑 ]
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非常的好，谢谢！
对了，除了以上那些外，那还需不需另外加一些其它内容呢。
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挺好的，不过语法上有点不太好呢。
谢谢！
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支持~~~~这个好多了
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呵呵，你再来两句话，Major in××专业，什么大学。。
呵呵，是的，语法上有点不好，呵呵，我平常不大注意语法，而且我刚才还发现有几个小错误。。LZ你自己看着改吧。。
再送你两句话：
A stable personality and high sense of responsibility are desirable.
个性稳重、具高度责任感。
Able to work under high pressure and time limitation.
能够在高压力下和时间限制下进行工作。
呵呵，我以前的老师提醒过我，面试的时候，最好体现自己的抗压性。
LZ，你自己看着改吧，有点忙。。
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好的，非常谢谢你那两句：
A stable personality and high sense of responsibility are desirable.
个性稳重、具高度责任感。
Able to work under high pressure and time limitation.
能够在高压力下和时间限制下进行工作。
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好的，你先忙，有空再向你讨教。
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呵呵，要不你也给我修改一下
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