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跟客人说想延期交货，因为来不及。这是我写的 。童鞋们帮忙看下 觉得哪些地方还可以改下I am sorry to inform you that we have to delay the shipment. The tannery said that the sheepskin not complete until at the end of the April.from the begin of may that we can strat PPS for you confirmation.this period must be continue at least one week for you approved.what’s more .the YKK factory said that the zippers will complete until 20 May,although we make an order when you send me the bulk tech files at first.
So our production time is too short,it’s impossible to complete before 10 June .we would like to postpone the delivery time at the end of the June .pls kindly advice .thank you.
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请大家帮帮忙 帮忙润色润色 更让客户容易理解和地道些的英语 表达 万分感谢啊
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给个建议哈 看着有点头晕
1、尽量多用被动态，去掉we。老外习惯用被动态的。
如：The sheepskin will be not completed until the end of April.
PPS requires your confirmation at the beginning of May.
剩下的大同小异，自己改吧。
2、仔细看了下，发现延期是有三个理由，那么不妨分1,2,3，来写。本来延期就够客户烦心的，邮件应该尽量让他们觉得一目了然。
以上纯属个人意见，觉得好就用吧。
Gook Luck with You!
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恩 了解了 谢谢你的建议
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After double check ，I am sorry to inform you that the shipment date have to be postponed for a few days. The followings are the details，
1， For tannery--- for the sheepskin not will be ready until end of April. 『At the beginning of May，we can start pps for your confirmation ，but it will take at least one week for your approval.』（personally，I do not think it is necessary to tell your customer this，for no matter what，this is always a basic part）
2， For YYK Factory--- the zippers will not be finished until 20 May, although we place the order to them once you send me the bulk tech files.
Based on what I mentioned above，it is clearly that the order is too urgent. Though I tried to push for you ，but as your know it is peak season now， so the goods is impossible to finish before 10 June. Pls kindly understand and confirm back that it is ok to to postpone the delivery date to end June .
Highly appreciate your help
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谢谢 简介且清楚 刚发出去了邮件就看到你的回复。学习了
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发邮件客人都不回应 55555 怎木办怎木办
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客人信用证已经开过来了 这个问题他采取不回应的态度的时候我应该继续发邮件说服 就这么继续下去吗
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Dear Sir,
Sorry, we met some problems by our side!!! But don't worry, I'll handle everything here.
The products will be send asap when finished.
I'll application your next order give special discount due to my mistake. Sorry again!
Best regards,
**
不用解释太多，越描越黑.....
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跟客人做的是信用证 ，他已经开过来了。这个问题也很麻烦吧
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既然是延期，在多理由对客户来说也是没意义的！！
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因为延期对于客户来说他也是有责任的，我一直在催他但他发给我的最终确认资料太慢了，断断续续的2个星期，以至于我辅料也延期了
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之前下单前你就应该说明 XX日之前确认原料 才能保证交期 ~
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恩 这个是我的疏忽，第一单经验还不足。
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我也是一样的，现在有个单也是延期，但是没办法，公司不怎么配合，哎
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