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In our profit-centered society, unemployment has attracted wide attention even from the education field.(背景)Should we only offer elementary education to those kids or shall we continue to educate them till they graduate from secondary school? What will happen if we deprive them of the rights to continue to be educated when they are still in elementary school?(提问)In this essay, I will analyze why those kids should carry on with secondary education.(间接法)In a recent flight by an A350 from London to the manufacturing base of this type of plane, the four engines just consumed 40 gallons of fuel, which is less than the amount of fuel used by four cars traveling the same distance .(举例)The example well illustrates the efficiency of air plane engines over common car engines.(过渡)To be based on hard evidences and sound argument, the essay will discuss why traveling via air planes should not be discouraged.(间接法)Many environmentalists are against the over use of planes for non-essential international traveling; on the other hand, rational realists are arguing that cars are using more fuel and producing more pollution compared with the iron birds.(双方观点,双方要使用具体的人或者学者)Which way of transportation should be discouraged?(提问)The writer will analyze…and prove that….(间接法)In most parents’ eyes, pc games are regarded as the way to get oneself spoiled .(背景)Do pc games have positive or negative effects on children? Should the children be kept away from this “evil ”?(两个问题)This article is used to analyze whether this new way of entertainment should be prohibited or not in order to help the children to get the most out of their life with the appearance of computers. (间接法)
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