加拿大外贸
Good morning.Haven't you received our email?
We can produce according to your target price,even we can provide to a lowest price to you,the 3-way extension socket only have USD0.7,but there aren't through the standard of GS/ TUV certificate.
The frist time,we are strictly offer the price according to the standard of GS/ TUV certificate.So you feel to high.
If you want to produce on the basis of your target price,we can write in GS/ TUV certificate on the card.We send a card to you,pls check it,thanks.
If you have any question or advice,pls let us know.
Wish to extablish busniess relationship with you.
我的水平有限，想要大家帮我修改下，谢谢大家！
[ 本帖最后由 Frank.Brown 于 2010-8-4 22:03 编辑 ]
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你还是把中文的说出来，我们会有不同的翻译，然后你自己可以比较的呢
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Haven't you received our email?前面加個DEARXXX
We can produce according to your target price,even we can provide to a lowest price to you,the 3-way extension socket only USD0.7,but there aren't through the standard of GS/ TUV certificate.
The frist time,we are strictly offer the price according to the standard of GS/ TUV certificate.So the price is higher.
Then we could offer in your target price by writing in GS/ TUV certificate on the card.We send a card to you,pls check it,thanks.
If you have any questions or advice,pls let us know.
Wish to cooperate with you.
修改了一些
FYI
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Haven't you received our email? 这个语气有点不对，似乎有责怪的意思。用Did you get our last mail?应该就可以了
We can produce according to your target price,even we can provide to a lowest price to you,the 3-way extension socket only have USD0.7,but there aren't through the standard of GS/ TUV certificate.
上面话不能这样写，即使你们能提供更低的价格也不要告诉客户。你就说你们能按照他们的目标价格生产，但是达不到 GS/ TUV 的认证标准。我的个人建议这样写就OK了：
The previous price we offered is based on the standard of GS/ TUV certificate. If you feel this price is too high, we can provide you the goods at your target price, but they cann't pass the GS/TUV
certification. For substitution, we can write the GS/ TUV certificate on the card which sample has already sent to you. Pls check n revert whether it is ok?
If you have any question or advice,pls let us know.
Wish to extablish busniess relationship with you.
如果客人觉得没有通过XX认证的不行，你就说和你们老板商量过了，可以给到你们的最低价格（似乎是$0.7每双),这样也许还可以吸引下客人。要是那样还不行，就直接吹了。毕竟公司还是要赚点的，呵呵
纯属个人意见，仅供参考。
我的水平也不咋的，希望对你有帮助！
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我的修改，个人觉得你写的太复杂了。客户看了会头大的
morning ,sir .
have you check my e-mail ?
according to your price , mass production can be made . price will be usd0.7 without GS/ TUV certificate .
pls feel free to connact me if you wanna.
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个人也比较同意楼上的，和老外说话不要太啰嗦，切题要狠、准！
Dear sir,
Everything goes OK? Have u checked my E-mail already?
Referring to the price, we could offer a best one for $0.7 without GS/TUV certificate. If u do have any need, pls feel free to contact me.
Best Regards
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